Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Another Story

I thought the time that the in class writing assignment that we did a few weeks ago was fun, so I decided to do it again.
Audience: Young people
Detail: An ipod that has been stolen
Setting: A classroom
Character: A young girl who is a goody goody
On Monday Marsha was on her way to school when she stopped to tie her shoes. She finally got up and started to walk towards her school when she stumbled over a stick on the sidewalk. She couldn’t catch her balance and fell forward and scrapped up her knee. Once she got to her school she went to her homeroom and asked her teacher for a band aid, her teacher asked her what it was needed for and saw that she had a deep cut on her knee. The teacher took the girl to the nurse’s office and while at the office some kids entered into the classroom. Drew the class clown noticed Marsha’s book bag at the front of the room and scurried up to snag her ipod that she always stores in the front pocket. When Marsha came back she noticed that her book bag had been moved and started to whine to the teacher. Marsha started to go through the bag and noticed that her ipod was missing. The teacher got red as a beet and told the class to fess up to who took the ipod or they would all lose 20 pts on their final grades. Finally after 10 minutes of frustration Drew finally fessed up.

2 comments:

  1. Marsha sure does have some great classmates! I never understood the stealing of things in grade school. Great stuff.

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  2. (Hahaha)I never understood the thoguth of stealing at all really; I mean I do but I don't understand how people could do I with out guilt consuming them. If they were starving and stealing food, I totally sympathize with that though.

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